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Where… Where is she..?

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Everything was perfectly simple and normal. The sun was just above the western horizon, displaying a wide range of warm colors through the sky as a last chance to remain seen. The town seemed to be dotted with people returning to their families and homes. Honestly, it was so normal that it made the author want to puke.
It wouldn’t last, of course. Anything normal tends not to.
A small figure stood out in the dying light. The townspeople didn’t take any notice-travelers were always passing through, especially at this time of day. This one was no different. Except, perhaps for the fact of the gleam in her dark eyes.
Lyza was tired, and frustrated that her target evaded her once again. Exorcists…   She shook her head and gazed at the town. It’s not home, but it’ll have to do.  Sighing, she trudged along the road and checked into an inn at the north end of the town.

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©2009 ~frostpelt
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Author's Comments

Uhhh... well, tell me if you like it. I won't continue it if you don't like it, because I want this to be good. Comment, critisize, enjoy! :D

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:iconriverspark:
That was pretty epic.
It had good writing style but it was also kind of funny.
"It was so normal that it made the author want to puke." xD

It was kind of short for a chapter, but for the beginning sample type thing it's a good length. :D

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My signature is hibernating for the winter.
:icongoldenfrost:
:jawdrop: I love it! Very descriptive.....sounds like something awesome ahead....I don't think it should be one chapter though...kind of short? Maybe like a pre-ish something? xD I forgot what those were called. >.<
:iconhorsedude12:
very very good ! write more !!!

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:iconfrostpelt:
thanks!! :D I will!

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~A Very Tragic Event~
Okay, so I saw the episode when Mosquito first appeared in Soul Eater.
And I've never looked at Pinocchio the same way since.
~Fin~

I SUPPORT THE EVIL SNOWMAN
:iconfrostpelt:
Yeah, it's a pre-ish thing, but I put chapter one because I wanted to. xD I'll keep writing! :hug: thanks for adding it to your favorites. :D

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~A Very Tragic Event~
Okay, so I saw the episode when Mosquito first appeared in Soul Eater.
And I've never looked at Pinocchio the same way since.
~Fin~

I SUPPORT THE EVIL SNOWMAN
:iconfrostpelt:
I put 'chapter one' out of randomness. But it's sort of a sample. If people didn't like it, I would have put it in scraps.

I'm going to keep adding some comments in my writing because I've been doing that for so long that it's become a habit. :iconnoesplz: But if you like it, I'll keep writing. :D

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~A Very Tragic Event~
Okay, so I saw the episode when Mosquito first appeared in Soul Eater.
And I've never looked at Pinocchio the same way since.
~Fin~

I SUPPORT THE EVIL SNOWMAN
:iconfrostpelt:
:D what's up?

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~A Very Tragic Event~
Okay, so I saw the episode when Mosquito first appeared in Soul Eater.
And I've never looked at Pinocchio the same way since.
~Fin~

I SUPPORT THE EVIL SNOWMAN
:icongoldenfrost:
Um. Ur butt. (Jk) That would be...awkward xD
:iconfrostpelt:
yeah..... :iconhyperplz:

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~A Very Tragic Event~
Okay, so I saw the episode when Mosquito first appeared in Soul Eater.
And I've never looked at Pinocchio the same way since.
~Fin~

I SUPPORT THE EVIL SNOWMAN

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